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Oct 14, 2011VRMurphy rated this title 1 out of 5 stars
Frankly, I'm not sure why I bothered finishing this book. Plotting/structure are ok but I guessed the big twist about halfway thru. Character development is weak and superficial, and a lot of the dialogue is simply unbelievable. Oh, and note to local authors - sure, mention local landmarks and/or addresses, but you don't need both for the same item - locals know where the main police station is, and it won't matter to out-of-town readers. Gets in the way of the story flow and seems a pretty small-town approach. I guess reading to the end was better than staring out the bus windows.